Aftermath: Star Wars - Chuck Wendig, Marc Thompson

I'm somewhat familiar with Wendig's writing style thanks to his work for White Wolf/World of Darkness, but I was hoping in long form (or at least in non-World of Darkness narrative) his style would smooth out a bit.

 

This still holds on to what I can only describe as an 'abrupt' writing style.  It favors short sentences and gives off an urgent feel.  He does manage to be descriptive beyond action sentences, but that's also true to his WoD work and still manages to be abrupt.